Orange Fritillary

[ScaryDan]

This is a sequence that I wrote. Its terribly abstract and probably makes no sense to you all, but they mean a hell of a lot to me. They run in order.

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Orange Fritillary
no cold. lines. define.
citrus. zest. particle.
swoon. flap. croon.
storm. head. crack.
grey. bright. sun.
green. flap (again).
constant. warm.

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Orangeness Comes At Desertion (Fritillary Two)
Scorch.


Wounded.
Particle.
Insignificant.
Apart.

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Random Orange Carpet Burn (Fritillary Again)

cheese and oranges.
I'm hungry.                    maybe Tuesday. no.
                                  DEFINITELY Tuesday.
                                  I like the word Tuesday.
        amazingness indeed.
                orange. carpet. burn.
                       thickness and density.
randomness.
uncontrol from order.
beauty in form unrestrained.

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Mon Parapluie Orange (Je T'aime)

inside, hollowness.
to be filled.

black (not orange)
still
empty

  je ne sais pas
  il sont mal
  je ne connu pas.
  elle a perdu sa...
                  sa...
  tu es oublié ton/mon             (aieee!)
      parapluie
QUOI?

c'etait un parapluie orange.
c'etait tres mignon.
est-ce que tu m'aimerais demain?
tu ne m'aime pas aujourd'hui...

                full now.
                (maintenant)

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like i said, abstract...
xoxo
Dan

[just a girl]

i like it...
especially the french  

[mesmerised]

the french one is awesome. but that could be because i don't completely understand it... i like it though. especially ton/mon. yours/mine. its an interesting thought...

[ScaryDan]

I'll translate the french for you all.

  je ne sais pas = i don't know (people)
  il sont mal = he is ill
  je ne connu pas. = i don't know (facts)
  elle a perdu sa... = she has lost her...
                  sa... = her...
  tu es oublié ton/mon  = you have forgotten your/my          <br>       parapluie = umbrella
QUOI? = WHAT?

c'etait un parapluie orange. = it was an orange umbrella
c'etait tres mignon. = it was very cute
est-ce que tu m'aimerais demain? = will you like me tomorrow?
tu ne m'aime pas aujourd'hui... = you don't like me today

                full now.
                (maintenant) = (now)