Indefinable

[luceluna]

sifting through all my old poems, printing off the ones i'm going to collate and send to laurie (in case my computer ever explodes, lol),  i found one i hadn't read for a while. it's two years old, but i love it.




I don’t know what it is
About you that makes me cry inside:
Tears of joy

I feel a deep, soulful yearning,
A connection,
A co-existence between
Two jigsaw pieces such as
Ourselves

I don’t know what lies
Awake in you
That stirs me and is present
In so many people
Who touch me
Who find me
Hollow and brittle as I
Find myself

I don’t know if it is love

If it is, I must love
People I have never seen with my
Eyes that see so much
But with my heart that sees
So little.



i am astounded by the clarity present in this... and my heart aches at its relevance.

[Ariela]

I do believe that this might be the best thing I've ever seen you write, Dan.

[Poeticsiren]

I'm inclined to agree with Dana. That poem strikes something deep within. Really amazing work. You definitely have to send that to me.

L.

[luceluna]

heh, i guess the last two years haven't counted for much. kinda how i feel right now anyway...