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Ache
Jan 15, 2002 2:01:50 GMT -5
Post by luceluna on Jan 15, 2002 2:01:50 GMT -5
omen bleeding -
a capsule, a floating.
i am far too lucky
to have you;
smiling trickles
you have me.
(i have one friend who always make me feel a little better)
you are an angel.
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Ache
Jan 15, 2002 23:25:16 GMT -5
Post by just a girl on Jan 15, 2002 23:25:16 GMT -5
I like this one dan.
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Ache
Jan 16, 2002 0:14:51 GMT -5
Post by luceluna on Jan 16, 2002 0:14:51 GMT -5
woohoo! it's not even a poem really..... just my way of telling someone how much i wuv 'em  |
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Ache
Jan 16, 2002 18:30:46 GMT -5
Post by ScaryDan on Jan 16, 2002 18:30:46 GMT -5
i like it too. simple and to the point. i tend to waffle (i don't speak, i ramble...)
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Ache
Jan 16, 2002 18:58:30 GMT -5
Post by Ariela on Jan 16, 2002 18:58:30 GMT -5
Beautiful imagery, Dan.  |
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Ache
Jan 16, 2002 19:01:14 GMT -5
Post by luceluna on Jan 16, 2002 19:01:14 GMT -5
lucky nathan hasn't slithered into this thread yet.... |
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