My buddy

Mommar
Full Member

Posts: 94

My buddy Jan 18, 2002 11:07:02 GMT -5

Quote

Post by Mommar on Jan 18, 2002 11:07:02 GMT -5

I've got a friend.

A life changing friend, a friend changing lives.

A wonderfully, wicked friend. A heart-wrenching, ray of light.

A soul soaring, a soul dreanched in flames.

They sadden me so, I could kiss them.
They anger me so, I could weep.
I love them so, I could hit them.

They're a funny kind of friend. The one where you don't know where you stand. Not a real friend, not a girlfriend or boyfriend. That glittery, giddy, inconsequential middle. That damnable state of perpetual hell.

Happy? Happy?

No.

Sad? Sad?

Why?

Both answers are wrong, both feel so very correct.

I think I have a friend...

~I have nipples too, ya know~

Ariela Moderator Posts: 82	My buddy Jan 18, 2002 15:56:32 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ariela on Jan 18, 2002 15:56:32 GMT -5 WOW. ::crying::
	Pain is temporary, film eternal.

Mommar Full Member Posts: 94	My buddy Jan 18, 2002 16:56:01 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mommar on Jan 18, 2002 16:56:01 GMT -5 Crying? Well that's no good.
	~I have nipples too, ya know~

Ariela Moderator Posts: 82	My buddy Jan 18, 2002 22:16:30 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ariela on Jan 18, 2002 22:16:30 GMT -5 Nah, sometimes crying is okay.
	Pain is temporary, film eternal.

Poeticsiren Administrator Oreo's mommy Posts: 128	My buddy Jan 18, 2002 23:57:32 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Poeticsiren on Jan 18, 2002 23:57:32 GMT -5 wow!!! thanks dan! that was great what alliteration too...this is so cool! it's the first poem of yours i have ever read! did it help to write? hug L.
	"Love takes its rhythm from the sea-seeking and leaving eternally."

Mommar
Full Member

Posts: 94

My buddy Jan 19, 2002 1:45:10 GMT -5

Quote

Post by Mommar on Jan 19, 2002 1:45:10 GMT -5

LOL, what you call alliteration I call... well, I had to look up what alliteration was first because I havne't had an english class in FOREVER. But I guess I did use it, didn't mean to. Just sounded better with those words. And, umm. I'm still just a junior member so I guess it didn't help all that much. LOL

~I have nipples too, ya know~

Happydoug Junior Member Posts: 32	My buddy Jan 23, 2002 12:19:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Happydoug on Jan 23, 2002 12:19:20 GMT -5 yeah dude, that is a pretty sweet little verse you got going on up there. very emotional... i consider a poem good when i can feel the emotions exuding from the words, and you got me there bro. peace, Happydoug

Mommar Full Member Posts: 94	My buddy Jan 24, 2002 11:48:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mommar on Jan 24, 2002 11:48:13 GMT -5 LOL, ALL of my words seem to exude something to somebody... most of the time they aren't so poetic though.
	~I have nipples too, ya know~

Post by Mommar on Jan 18, 2002 11:07:02 GMT -5

Post by Ariela on Jan 18, 2002 15:56:32 GMT -5

Post by Mommar on Jan 18, 2002 16:56:01 GMT -5

Post by Ariela on Jan 18, 2002 22:16:30 GMT -5

Post by Poeticsiren on Jan 18, 2002 23:57:32 GMT -5

Post by Mommar on Jan 19, 2002 1:45:10 GMT -5

Post by Happydoug on Jan 23, 2002 12:19:20 GMT -5

Post by Mommar on Jan 24, 2002 11:48:13 GMT -5

Quick Reply