Another scrawl...

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Another scrawl for you guys to ponder!....

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Intensely staring,
In silence you ripple.
Stained muscular tension
Penetrating deep,
Irritating my follicles.

Fierce talons
Scratch at your existence
Scarring the scar.
Withdrawing
Where acid tones cling
under nail-beds.

A menacing glint
Of my essence
decends upon
the mocking watcher.
Not a flinch.
Stern determination.

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Rala  

[ScaryDan]

i ADORE "irritating my follicles"!!! its WONDERFUL!!! the feeling is so simply and adequately described!

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thanx dan!  

It's so great to get feedback at last, from people on the same wavelength who sorta understand what I am rambling about!

Rala