Blindness of Burden

[ScaryDan]

Blindness of Burden

slow to change.
a cliff,
eroded like my mind,
collapsed under the weight of your burden when you go.

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My writing lecturer told me that the shorter the poem, the more weight placed on each word, so use each word to it's fullest.

I think in your brief writings, your words carry the burden fine...

Rala