Our Conversation in Silence

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Hey guys.. I've tried registering.. and tried and tried... and now I have given up and decided to post anyway! So here tis..

Our Conversation in Silence


A whisp of smoke
dances with your hand.
Once flamboyant gestures
now calmly wave
the smoke on its way.

The lounge chair
Sighs beneath you,
Spreading brown cloth
across the spectrum
Of my eye.

Our words
A tone of blankets.
A crease in your trousers
slides to an ankle
bare and natural,
Typical of you.

Conversations
Flow from your toes
to the faded carpet
where I lie.
Rough thread burns me,
A cry
Caught in my breath.

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Rala

[luceluna]

i'm so sorry you had so much trouble registering, hon.... i know a few people who've had password problems and subsequently given up, so i'm glad you persevered. keep trying - maybe you could use a different name and use a false e-mail () or something.

as for the poem: it rocks! it has a wonderful experiential flow to it... i hope we see lots more of your musings and ramblings (check out the other forums too!) soon.

::HUG::

;D

[[e-mail]]

hey hey!

Thanx! Yeah I have given up on registering for now.. but I woun't hold back on posting!

Rala  

[ScaryDan]

lara...wow!!! it captures (what i think is) the moment PERFECTLY!!! and it flows so elegantly too!

[Poeticsiren]

WELCOME LARA!

I like your stuff and I'm so glad you kept on posting. I'm sorry about the registration biz...I can't do anything to change it, I'm sorry. Just try another name or something.

I like your name too! hehe

Laurie

[[e-mail]]

Thanks for the warm welcome!

Hehe, yeah the name is pretty cool.. but I only came across it thanks to Dan and his alternative name suggestions to get me registered.. Raal.. it has a nice Grrrowel to it!  ;D

[luceluna]

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