utopia

[Lotus_Field]

the peace of still life,
the painting of a sunny day
with a boy and a girl
laying hand-in-hand
on a rose bed,
but the sun doesn't dance
on their bodies
and the clouds won't float
trhough the blue sky.

the thorns they can't see,
hidden under the blood red
of the rose petals,
but they are there,
they'll feem them
when the rose bed breaks.

[luceluna]

wow, i really like this. reminds me of Rimbaud. kickass work

[dirtgirl]

yes...very bittersweet  ;D