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Post by luceluna on Dec 19, 2001 6:01:57 GMT -5
messing around w/ someone tonight and came up with this. everyone post one ;D (a haiku is a three line poem, 5 syllables, then 7, then 5)
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Breath, a lotus bloom.
Her orchards sigh with rich fruit.
Water fills her eyes.
~~~~~~~
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Post by 'Guest' on Dec 19, 2001 6:29:33 GMT -5
daylight in my heart
that feeds your soft horizon
many colors bloom
moonlight in my soul
to paint your precious visage
with soft white fingers
okay so the second one sukt :X
.~*^POof!^*~.
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Post by Poeticsiren on Dec 19, 2001 12:16:20 GMT -5
NO WAY XS!!! all of yours rocked!!! they were very very good! both of you guys wrote some beautiful lines....i have trouble with making haiku pretty since it's so structured, but you guys did awesome.  l. |
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Post by luceluna on Dec 19, 2001 17:40:18 GMT -5
ooh grrrr, dan: they DO NOT SUCK!! XS's haikus combined by luceluna: moonlight in my soul that feeds your soft horizon with heart, white fingers |
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Post by 'Guest' on Dec 19, 2001 17:47:43 GMT -5
get on AIM foo  |
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Post by ScaryDan on Dec 30, 2001 3:08:07 GMT -5
apologies to trent reznor:
i want to fuck you
like the animal you are
oh god i'm so tired
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Post by 'Guest' on Jan 21, 2002 23:01:29 GMT -5
women are shallow
like the pond i threw rocks at
splish splash, watch life crash
*bows*
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Post by luceluna on Jan 22, 2002 6:10:50 GMT -5
X S bows to feel,
as fleshy gusts of autumn
fall, into his eyes.
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Post by ScaryDan on Jan 22, 2002 16:51:17 GMT -5
flying to fall over
a pickup to soar again
fly or fall today
(crap but it makes me feel...something)
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Post by luceluna on Jan 23, 2002 3:03:26 GMT -5
Flying into mist;
Bamboo a fleeting raindrop;
Hot heavenly skin.
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Post by Mommar on Jan 23, 2002 11:34:49 GMT -5
Fuck fuck, fuck fuck fuck.
Fuck, fuckitty, fuck fuck fuck
Fuck fuck fuck fuck, damn.
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Post by Mommar on Jan 23, 2002 11:35:23 GMT -5
And it's even got aliteration too. LOL
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Post by ScaryDan on Jan 23, 2002 22:23:33 GMT -5
wrote this today at work (people were probably wondering why i kept muttering to myself and counting on my fingers)
too few syllables
to tell you all i want to,
yet these are enough.
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Post by Poeticsiren on Jan 23, 2002 23:14:28 GMT -5
Precipitated
Symphony of dialyzed
Salt and cloudy skies
L.
OH MY GOSH GUYS I ACTUALLY WROTE SOMETHING POETIC AFTER NINE MONTHS OF DROUGHT!
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Post by luceluna on Jan 24, 2002 0:39:17 GMT -5
laurie: a lil less science, please!!!  just kidding, honey scarydan: i like mo: no comment  |
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just kidding, honey 